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:preview: test comic page (FOMM)

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well, the beta name so far for my comic is Fixed On My Mind ( shortened to FOMM)

this is a test page i did just to get practice in, so far i already know backgrounds and more attention to detail are required, anyone with some knowledge on background illustration i would be very gratful to spread a few advice tips towards my direction ^^

enjoy this page for now ( it will be redrawn for the full blown comic dont worry)
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I really like the flow of the comic a lot of action going on in just a few panels. Love seeing doors getting busted! :la: As far as suggestions go for BG, what you can do is start out by setting up the scene (think opening shot of a movie) with the location and overall environment the guys are heading into. If they are busting down the doors of a mansion belonging to a shady tycoon you could start by making the first panel a shot of the place from lets say Connor's perspective while he is hiding in the shrubs. The amount of detail in the panel that you add contributes to the overall mood of the story. While drawing the building ask yourself (is it run down? or new with expensive decor?) after you set a proper location you don't have to spend as much time focusing on the BG because the reader is now aware of what the place is and it allows them to follow the guys as the rampage through the place. In the first panel you can finish drawing in the entrance way and just with a few quick additions of things like indoor plants or the like and we have a good idea of what the inside is like. Hope this helps my friend.